Wednesday, June 2, 2010

"Nervous" Journal Introduction

For one of my writer’s choice pieces I chose a journal entry titled “Nervous.” It was journal number five, written towards the middle of the quarter. I wrote about a time I was really nervous, it happened to be time I was sitting in the DMV waiting to take my drivers test to get my license. I picked this journal because I described exactly what happened and how nervous I was because I was anxious to get my license. I use very strong detail to describe my experience. One example of the detail I used is, “I felt like she was bracing herself for a crash and she was looking for something negative to write on her clipboard.”

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