My name is Eric Koffski and I’m 19 years old. I have a brother who is 26 years old and sister that is 24. My girlfriend and I met in freshmen year of high school and have been dating since. I love sports, from the competitiveness to the exercise you receive. I am currently a student at Everett Community College. My goal for school is to finish with my associates degree in the welding program. This is the end of my first year and I have learned many new things. I’ve learned how to use an AutoCad machine which is a computerized cutting torch that automatically cuts the shape you created on a computer. I am also in the process of getting certified for Stick welding.
What I like about writing is that you can express yourself easily and it is a way to be unique and different from everyone else. No two people will ever write something exactly the same, no matter how alike they are. However I do have trouble with writing topics or picking one for that matter. When given the opportunity to pick my own topic, I have trouble deciding on just one thing and I'll make my essay to vague. However, “What is the best advice given to you?” is easy because I can think of everything I know about that piece of advice down, when I heard it, who said it and where it happened.
Since the beginning of the quarter I have learned to use more descriptive words and use them in complete sentences. I found out I used a lot of fragments, then learned how to correct them using commas, semi colons and combining sentences. For my portfolio I have chosen to use “Time To Focus” for my descriptive piece as I feel that was one of my strong papers using the “show not tell” theory. Also I would like to use two of my journals that show my progression throughout the quarter and strengths and weaknesses in writing.
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